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PostPosted: Jul 16 2004 02:59 pm 
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Stay Focus
By: Manny Mendez Jr.

Why did I do such things, which separate me from all that is good?

Stay Focus.

I feel like I’ve let everyone down,
On the ground, feeling like no ones around.

Stay Focus.

Why did I think of impure things?
Only to have my mind, my body corrupted by the lust of the flesh and my heart tied in knots that can’t be refreshed.

Stay Focus.

Why do I feel like I am lost in a vortex where my sins are revealed only to make me feel even less?

Stay Focus.

Why oh Lord must I go through this pain, this life where nothing seems to go right?
Why do I feel like a piece of me has gone away, never to come back, leaving me astray?

Stay Focus.

Lord, please answer me. Why?

My child I have answered you already, but it seems to me, I have tare this jungle down with my spiritual machete.
So listen to me and listen clearly.

Stay Focus, as I’m come to clean you out, weed you out, planting some seeds that will make scream and shout.

Stay Focus, on the task at hand, I called you to help those in need of helping hand.

Stay Focus, don’t cry and weep for it is I and I alone you should keep.

Stay Focus, and do not fight those who oppress you, but rather learn to love those who will truly bless you.

Stay Focus, Do not fight this war with one accord, just know this the battle belongs to your lord.

Stay Focus, do not listen to him that blinds you from me; just remember; resist him and he shall flee.

Stay Focus, know I am here by you, to lead and guide you.

Stay Focus, and keep this in mind, I WILL NEVER LEAVE EVEN TILL THE END OF TIME.


STAY FOCUS.

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PostPosted: Jul 16 2004 03:00 pm 
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"Tea Stain"

Sorrow befalls me,
This soul-less entity.
That wishes to be free.
Only if I could see,
If i could find the key,
To finally be happy,
Or let me leave...
...Drown into the sea.
Then no one would find me,
Like a tear drop in a glass of tea,
And the shattered cup is my reality.
Dripping out,im left to bleed,
Into the stain,that i happen to be.
Now as i have become the feed,
For the roaches of this world that need,
Another soul-less being.
Ten million strong and growing,
Life becomes merely a dream.
This tear in the stain of tea,
That no one ever wanted to see...

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PostPosted: Jul 16 2004 03:04 pm 
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That was deep.
here goes another

The pain of life. By: Manny Mendez Jr.
(Kid) Mom what are you doing? Why are you packing your things? Mom where are you going? Why are you …. (Mother) “Look boy, I hate you, you were just a mistake, something never meant to be, and I only used you as insurance, thinking I could get something out of you. You know a house, a car, money huh I was wrong the only thing I got was more kids, more mistakes, just like your father the biggest mistake of them all, he promised me a lot but all he ever gave me was pain. So now I say to you all Good riddance.
(Kid)
Mom don’t go, mom.
"Good Lord, where are you?
If you really do exist,
why don't you come out of hiding and
do something about this creature in distress?
I am physically weary, I am mentally depressed,
and I am spiritually defeated.
I can't eat, can't sleep.
I am like garbage,
discarded refuse in the back alley;
like yesterday's newspaper only to be
shuffled around by the wind.
I feel like some sort of zombie,
some non-entity,
some nothing that people,
if they acknowledge,
would only curse. I don’t know who I am any more. Lord who am I? WHO AM I………..WHO………..AM………..I… (GOD)
Who are you?
You are that person, who walks in love, who comes to minister to those in need of a helping hand,
Who are you?
You are that person, who has the authority to heal the sick, cast out the enemy and preach to the nations,
Who are you?
You are a mountain mover, who moves by faith through the impossible obstacles that a mere man of this world could never go through,
Who are you?
You are the faithful servant to me, knowing I will never leave you nor forsake you even till the end of time,
Who are you?
You are the one, who tithes in the most cheerful way, expecting me to bless you,
Who are you?
You are the one who believes in the second coming of my son, who knows that on that day you will shout with joy and gladness knowing you made it home to hear me say “WELL DONE thou good and faithful servant”,
Who are you?
You are the one who does not let a rock out praise him when knowing that you, which have breath, praise me.
Who are you?
You are the person who forgives as I forgave you, so go ahead ask me the question if you dare, because then I will say to you, you are my Friend in which I have made you to be. Now GO and tell all who you are.

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PostPosted: Jul 16 2004 03:45 pm 
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Is anyone going to rate theese?
we would really like some feed back.

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PostPosted: Jul 20 2004 08:46 am 
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manny is the man wrote:
Stay Focus
By: Manny Mendez Jr.

Why did I do such things, which separate me from all that is good?

Stay Focus.

I feel like I’ve let everyone down,
On the ground, feeling like no ones around.

Stay Focus.

Why did I think of impure things?
Only to have my mind, my body corrupted by the lust of the flesh and my heart tied in knots that can’t be refreshed.

Stay Focus.

Why do I feel like I am lost in a vortex where my sins are revealed only to make me feel even less?

Stay Focus.

Why oh Lord must I go through this pain, this life where nothing seems to go right?
Why do I feel like a piece of me has gone away, never to come back, leaving me astray?

Stay Focus.

Lord, please answer me. Why?

My child I have answered you already, but it seems to me, I have tare this jungle down with my spiritual machete.
So listen to me and listen clearly.

Stay Focus, as I’m come to clean you out, weed you out, planting some seeds that will make scream and shout.

Stay Focus, on the task at hand, I called you to help those in need of helping hand.

Stay Focus, don’t cry and weep for it is I and I alone you should keep.

Stay Focus, and do not fight those who oppress you, but rather learn to love those who will truly bless you.

Stay Focus, Do not fight this war with one accord, just know this the battle belongs to your lord.

Stay Focus, do not listen to him that blinds you from me; just remember; resist him and he shall flee.

Stay Focus, know I am here by you, to lead and guide you.

Stay Focus, and keep this in mind, I WILL NEVER LEAVE EVEN TILL THE END OF TIME.


STAY FOCUS.


that was really touching, but could you please not use the blue the next time, my eyes are killing.. thanks.

I give you an A

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PostPosted: Jul 20 2004 08:48 am 
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D Min wrote:
"Tea Stain"

Sorrow befalls me,
This soul-less entity.
That wishes to be free.
Only if I could see,
If i could find the key,
To finally be happy,
Or let me leave...
...Drown into the sea.
Then no one would find me,
Like a tear drop in a glass of tea,
And the shattered cup is my reality.
Dripping out,im left to bleed,
Into the stain,that i happen to be.
Now as i have become the feed,
For the roaches of this world that need,
Another soul-less being.
Ten million strong and growing,
Life becomes merely a dream.
This tear in the stain of tea,
That no one ever wanted to see...


dude, I have no words to rate that.. that was really deep and touching also.. I give you an A also.


I bet you guys rawked it in English?

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PostPosted: Jul 20 2004 09:26 am 
They all suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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PostPosted: Jul 20 2004 01:55 pm 
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Lets see you write something with out stealing it from others!!

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PostPosted: Jul 28 2004 12:15 pm 
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Know what Manny? I like your stuff. Got any more? I know you joke around on here all the time, but your poetry really has heart. 8)

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PostPosted: Jul 28 2004 12:17 pm 
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The God wrote:
They all suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


And when it comes to sucking, "The" here really knows what's what...

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PostPosted: Aug 19 2004 01:34 am 
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This is only about 1/3 of this poem, but this is a good example of my shit.

Now more than ever, mere thought makes me shiver.
The notion of purity and it's complete destruction.
Lost all of a sudden, in a beautiful psychosis.
Sanity and chaos, drowning in a pungent ocean.
And unsatisfied angel, misguided by abstract notions.
Mental Explosions.
A random meshing of peace and the unreal.
Hallucination in the back of my mind, biding their time.
Bloodstream contaminations committing treason in rhyme.
Fuck a reason for crime.
Emotions died.
Mental Explosions.
Deja vu, in no noticable pattern.
A reoccurance of life, or a lack of,
But with each reincarnation the being holds twice the matter.
To the point where headphones must be kept on.
Just to keep reality from pouring out.
And dreams must be left in the bed that was slept on,
So the flashbacks don't wander the streets with an open mouth.
Emotional doubt.
Mental Explosions.
A beautiful dissaster, waiting to happen, wanting to come faster.
Thought collapses on perception, crushing it flat,
Searching for what?
Not finding it and running back.
And thats that, the end of the line, apocalypse.
The begining of the infinite,
And anyone who's tripped has seen it twice.
Time and space ripped, a reoccurance of life.
Mental erosions.
Endless bars of explosions.
A need to smoke trees, release and just lose focus.
A need to empty my head.
Forget what I've said, fuck regret, desert reality,
And simply empty a clip instead.
A need to get violent with myself, and everyone else.
A need to silence this voice, saying this choice is bad for my health.
Emotions not felt.
Mental Explosions.
A I take notice, of all interior voices.
Give them due respect, but don't trust them yet with true choices.
Put my present personality up on a pedastal,
To be mocked and stoned, feathered an tarred,
Emotionally scarred by the rest,
Left, in a deserted part of my mind,
Hanging by the neck.
Barely surviving by the parameter of a schitzophrenic soliliquie
That hasn't even been read yet.
Emotions far from in check,
Mental Explosions

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PostPosted: Aug 19 2004 05:36 pm 
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You say that life's bitch and I think so too
But what you forget is that it's all beacause of you
You hypocritical pricks demand equality
Well,why don't you practice what you fucking preach
You hate us all because we're not like you
We're different so we're shit to you
Well, in the long run we'll be the ones laughing
Laughing at you who think you're better
I can't imagine what life must be like
Trying to be something that I'm not
Trying to fit into the endless mold
Of joining these vain, shallow snots
I say again that your full of shit
Saying that you demand acceptance
While denying us that same right, damn it
You turn and shake your heads
Saying your sick of us freaks
Well we're sick of you fucks too
And soon it won't even matter
When Fate turns it's eye on you
Ain't it funny how things end up?
Us laughing as you lay crying
We tried to tell you before
That we'll get you back one day
And paybacks are a bitch, aren't they?

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PostPosted: Sep 8 2004 08:15 pm 
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Images in your mind
shapes and shadows that form imagination
enhanced by the surroundings
of the world it's kind
Some of the shapes are grim
shapes of things to come
These can never change at all
unless you were born to win
The shadows run deep and ever deeper
to where they are not forgotten
only seen in the daylight hours
not seen when you are asleep
They form a vistion of your being
and the life you live and will
telling you a story
but one only you are seeing
pu them together as on
you will see you self
from the day of your birth
to the day you are done

K sorry I got bored ..lol

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PostPosted: Sep 9 2004 01:14 am 
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Location: where there are trees in our backyard
here's a lil poem i came up with

It's really hard to say the words to you whom is unknown.
I know that somewhere out there you're waiting all alone.
How did I ever find you, how are you meant for me?
Only perpetual motion and in time we two shall see.
Two hearts and minds and souls alike, drifting parallel,
my lips are sealed, until a kiss, for I will never tell.
You trust in me, and I in you, yet face is still a blur,
so many lines thrown from a poet, aimed to please just her.
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PostPosted: Sep 13 2004 08:19 pm 
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Location: Somewhere between reality and the edge of a dream.
Mama's love to her BitterBaby...by Lori

I have a little beachball
I hide it in my shirt
But soon this little meatball
Is really gonna hurt

My husband thinks its funny
I look so cute and round
If he giggles once more at me
I'm gonna knock him down

I love my little beachball
I think that someday maybe
I'm gonna lose this meatball
And have myself a baby.

(snaps all around)

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